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Close My Eyes.

 

CLOSE MY EYES

 

written by poetic-tragedy in 2008 

 

I try to see through all the tears in my eyes.

It's the pain deep inside that let me cry.

I can't see through the windown, cause it's steamed up.

I am feeling down again, I'm sure it's because of you.

 

I close my eyes just to realize,

to forge the world around me.

I close my eyes to figure out

my own sense of life.

 

I'm walking my way out of hell, I'm alone.

I'm starring at the sun, but feeling the shadows around me.

Then I am feeling there's no need to be worry, but I am.

I lost my hopes, lost my love, what did I wrong?

 

-Chorus 2x-

 

I tried to figure out the truth,

you're not my only one.

I thought we could be everything,

thought that you are everything.

I close my eyes just to realize,

to understand my feelings for you.

All the love in my heart,

all the love in my soul

don't know the answer, don't know.

I can't understand the reason why

I am loving you.

 

-Chorus 2x-

 

I close my eyes just to realize,

to forge the world around me.

I close my eyes to figure out

my own sense of life.

I have to close my eyes to see.

I have to close my eyes to feel.

I have to close my eyes to understand me.

1 Kommentar 17.1.09 19:36, kommentieren

The End.

THE END

 

written by poetic-tragedy in summer 2008. 

 

We're sitting together on your bed and starring holes in the air,

nobody's talking, nobody's laughing, I'm next to you,

but I'm feeling not, I'm feeling not that I'm next to you,

We don't have to say anything and we're  quiete.

 

I don't know what's different by now

I don't know, don't know what's going on

You have your life, I've got my life

and we're not living a life together

 

Now the time is gone, time's away

I'm feeling alone at your side, I am down

The tears that I cry are invisible, in my mind

It's feeling like the coldest winter, but it's june

and tell me why, why am I feeling so sad with you?

It's feeling like the end, it's coming now

 

You're like a ghost next to me, I can't feel you

It's colder as ice to sit next to you and feel the pain

There's so much lies I told you, so much I didn't tell you

and by now I can't trust you, Can't trust you anymore

 

I don't know what's different by now

I don't know, don't know what's going on

You have your life, I've got my life

and we're not living a life together


-Chorus-

 

It's the pain deep inside, Something just isn't right

I wish that it would just go away, I'm living a lie

I realize that I need, that I need you now

But I'm giving up on everything, giving up now

You'd never listened to me, I listened to you

and our times are flying away, say goodbye

I'm saying Goodbye to you, to you

 

-Chorus-

 

It's coming now

Our time's away, time's away

Feeling so down next to you

Our time's away, time's away

It's coldest winter next to you

It's the end, the end, our time's over now

 

 

2 Kommentare 17.1.09 15:14, kommentieren

She Had To Go.

SHE HAD TO GO

 

written by poetic-tragedy in winter 2008. 

 

She came to me to told me that she felt in love with me.

She surprised me and I thought that she appears sweet and nice.

I thought about her together with me, but then I understood

I could not forget the person I love and I had to told her that.

 

She could never ever replace my sweethearts, that's the one I ever loved.

There was no place inside my heart for her love, so she had to go away.

I said that we could try to be friends, but she could not understand.

She always tries to impress me and to made me love her, but I cannot love her, no.

 

I told her that she had to go away from me.

It is hard sometimes to say it honestly.

I am so sorry for breaking her heart again,

that she'd lost her hopes she had found again.

But I had to tell her that she had to go away from me.

 

She was on my nerves, because she could not understand.

She always tried to be my only one, but she could not be to me.

I told her that I was fall in love with someone she doesn't know.

And she tried to figure out the reasons why I don't love her, too.

 

She was always around me and did not give up for loving me.

Eyes watched all around the time and I could not feel free.

She didn't have anything to say and it was getting harder day by day

to get rid of her face, so I had to told her that she had to go out of my face.

 

-Chorus-

 

It's hard sometimes to say the truth,

but I can't find another way .

She didn't ever understand me, no.

She haven't ever understood what I meant.

She thought she was good when she's acting like me.

But she couldn't realize that I just wanted to be free.

This could never be.

 

-Chorus 2x-

 

I told her she had to go, that she had to go, she had to go away from me.

1 Kommentar 17.1.09 15:11, kommentieren

Forgotten Love.

FORGOTTEN LOVE

 

written by poetic-tragedy in summer 2008.

 

I never saw a reason to be in another time and place.

I never found a star that made a wish, everything's going wrong right now.

I never felt this way before, never felt the pain inside of me.

I never tried to save my heart, but I have to do it right now. oh.

 

Because you can break me, hate me, love me.

If you want you can destroy me and make me be sad. Oh Oh.

 

Am I your forgotten love?

You know that I'm your only one.

Don't try to forget my smile.

Because it's deep inside your heart.

Don't try to runaway

when life gets bad, it could be the start from here.

Am I your forgotten love?

I'm sure you think of me sometimes.

If you try to break my heart,

I will be desperate and break your life.

Don't try to forget my face,

because it's senseless to forget, yeah.

 

I never found a way to be away from here, but you found a way.

I never tried to break your heart, but you destroyed my smile. you did.

I never cried because I hadn't a reason to cry alone this time.

I never tried to forget a smile, because 'til you I never tried to forget anything. 'til you.

 

Because you can hurt me, love me, make me cry.

If you want you can destroy me and make me wanna die. oh oh.

 

-Chorus-

 

I'm tired of the games you play, tired of the silence you left.

There's a sad goodbye to you, I try to forget you, but you do

Make me love you and I can't do, I can not let you go, because I love you.

You left without me, found a place to be away from here,

Everytime you find new ways to hurt me, but do you understand

I am your only reason to smile? that I'm your only one?

But you don't realize, don't understand anything, because you're wrong

 

-Chorus 2x-

 

1 Kommentar 17.1.09 14:54, kommentieren

Blue Eyes (Hypnotize)

BLUE EYES (HYPNOTIZE)

 

written by poetic-tragey in summer 2007. 

 

I can't tell you how much I love you

You don't know all the pain

I'm so sorry, but I'm broken

And I need you now, I need you

 

I'm looking out the window

Crying because of you

Come to me and love me, too

Because that's what I am looking for

 

I'll be there for you all the time

I still feel the same and I know

I would fall for you again

 

Your deep blue eyes

Yeah, they hypnotize me

You're too hot to describe

and it's difficult what I feel

Your deep blue eyes

are like the oceans, yeah

I'm waiting here forever

just to see you smile

and I hope that you realize

my feelings for you that I love you

 

Without you I am nothing

and I'm without you today

I can't stop my tears

they're rolling down my face

 

I've got lost my smile

and think I'll never fall in love again

I'm waiting in the fire

I can't escape, I need you

 

I'll be there for you all the time

I still feel the same and I know

I would fall for you again

 

-Chorus-

 

I'm waiting here in the dark

to see your smile again

It's too complicated what I feel

It's difficult, so different by now

You're so contagious, I know

I'll never forget you, no

I'm not over the worst,  don't feel alive

I'm surprised how I don't survived

And my heart's following you everyhwhere you are Oh

 

-Chorus 2x-

 

They are more blue than the sea

more blue than every sea I've ever seen

Blue eyes, blue eyes, They are more blue than the sea.

1 Kommentar 17.1.09 14:51, kommentieren

Bleeding Heart.

BLEEDING HEART

 

written by poetic-tragedy in 2008. 

 

I didn't ever know what love means to me.

I'm just sitting here on my chair and waiting for you.

It's a dark room and a black heart inside of me.

Time makes it harder and you destroy me.

 

I'm waiting here alone until we meet again.

I was all wrong, but you knew it better than me.

But I thought that we could be forever together, no.

 

Everything's wrong, I know it by now.

We're so different and all is gone.

It's a long way to feel the love inside

and it's harder than I ever thought.

My bleeding heart's crying in front

dark tears, sad tears and black tears

are coming out of my bleeding heart.

 

I'm feeling so lost inside of myself.

I can't be wrong, I know all the pain.

I'm trying to get out of this hell.

All the pain destroys me all again.

It's a black heart that's beating inside.

It's tearing my heart out again.

 

I'm waiting here alone until we meet again.

I was all wrong, but you knew it better than me.

But I thought that we could be forever together, no.

 

-Chorus- 

 

I'm bleeding, keep on bleeding, yeah.

I can't be wrong, it's all the pain that tells I'm not wrong.

I'm feeling so lonely, feeling so bad because of you.

I can't be alone on my own at home again.

I'm bleeding like my heart is bleeding bloody tears, too.

I'm waiting here alone until we meet again.

I was all wrong, but you knew it better than me.

But I thought that we could be forever together, no.

 

-Chorus 2x-

 

Bleeding, Oh Oh Oh, Bleeding Oh Oh Oh

I'm bleeding, bleeding, keep on bleeding

My bleeing Oh Oh Oh Bleeding Heart

It's because of you

1 Kommentar 17.1.09 14:48, kommentieren

When You Smile

WHEN YOU SMILE

 

written by poetic-tragedy in 2008.

 

Part One:

Everyday I think it is over,

but then I look deep inside your eyes

and understand how much I love you,

that I don't wanna let you go.

 

Everyday I think that I am free,

but then I think back at your smile

and understand how much I miss you.

This is when I start to cry.

 

Chorus:

When you smile you bring me to cry.

You found a way to really hurt me.

(Yes, you hurt me, hurt me)

I can't remember the very first time

I cried because of your beautiful smile.

There's nothing I want more than you,

Here is nothing I could ever do.

When you smile you make me wanna cry.

You found a way to be away from me.

(Your heart is miles away from me)

I tried to stop my pain, but I can not forget

your face and the way you smile.

 

Part Two:

Everyday I could swear it is over,

but it's really hard to forget your smile,

I understood that I don't wanna be without you,

and I don't wanna let you go.

 

Everyday I think that I am finished with you,

but then you across my way (my way),

then I hear your name,

and it reminds me back of you again.

 

Repeat Chorus

 

Part Three:

Everyday I could swear that I am finished with you,

but then I have to understand that I am loving you.

Why is life so complicated, why don't you love me, too?

My heart guides my mind and this is not me with you.

When you are next to me, do you feel my heartbeat?

I know your heart is nearer than you thought it could be.

Try to be honest, try to be strong and tell me, tell me you love me.

Try to tell me what you're feeling, try to be hones and try to tell me.

You could change my life, change your life, too.

I don't wanna be sad forever, you don't wanna be, too.

 

Repeat Chorus 2x

 

Part Four:

This is when you smile,

this is when I start to cry.

I know, I know, I know,

I will cry and die inside.

This is when you smile

and this is when I start to cry.

This is when my life begins to get bad.

Oh, this is when, when you smile.

 

2 Kommentare 17.1.09 14:45, kommentieren